New Short Story: Time

Posted by on May 13, 2014 in Blog Posts, New Short Story | Fiction, Philosophical Diatribe, Short Story

It has been awhile since I released a short story.  Personally, I find writing a manuscript more fulfilling because of the details I can add to the story.  However, sometimes you get bitten by the bug and decide to write something that pops into your mind.  This piece hit me while I was rabbit sitting my friend’s bunny.  Luckily, I had my computer on me and half a battery.  Two hours later, the rough draft was done.  Another hour, and the second draft was edited.  A couple of emails between me and my editor, and the final piece was complete.  Here is an excerpt from Time my new short story:

“I’m next, John!” John had fallen asleep leaning against a golden pole with red velvet ropes. His new found friend grabbed him by the shoulder and shook him awake.

 

With a startle, John popped to attention, “What? Where, what, are we there, uh—”

 

The man interrupted John’s disjunctive questioning, “You dozed off again. You know you don’t have to sleep anymore.”