Haiku – Writing in the Corner

Posted by on Apr 23, 2017 in Haiku

A Petrified Vine
Suddenly, Aquamarine Light, Life
The Forest Breathes Anew

~Theodore Maestranzi

This Haiku took me way too long to write.  At the coffee shop: I read, wrote a journal entry, wrote another haiku, and then got brain busted on this one.  I knew what I wanted, and that was to focus on the color aquamarine, but I found it impossible to really drive to the heart of the haiku’s message since so many syllables were taken up by that single word.  Each time I tried to write it, I found myself struggling and trying to increase the density of each word to fully cover what I was feeling.  In the end, I like the way it ended up, but I wish I could share it with the person who inspired it.